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Title: First Date, 1/?

Fandom: Otalia

Rating: PG

Spoilers: Yes, for the 5/5 & maybe 5/6 episode.

Warnings: None

Disclaimers: Guiding Light and Otalia belong to CBS and P&G. I’m getting nothing from this but a little bit of amusement.

A/N: My version of a resolution of the spa trip and how we may eventually get to a mutual kiss. ‘Cause I.WANT.IT. like yesterday!

 

Natalia couldn’t believe it had gone bad so fast. They had been getting massages and giving each other those looks that certainly meant more than them being friends. She thought they were getting somewhere and all of a sudden, Olivia threw in that jab about her religion. She was tired of it. Tired of the confusion and awkwardness and uncertainty. 

She needed for them to get their act together. Get on some kind of clear path and have an understanding, but the chances were getting further and further away the more Olivia packed her bag.

“This was a mistake.” Olivia was finished and storming for the door.

Natalia spun around, furious, “You know, this is just great! Go ahead, run away…again!” Natalia stalked over to her and as Olivia pulled the door open, she slammed it back closed.

“Stop running, Olivia, and talk to me.”

“What do you want me to say? I don’t have the answers. I don’t know what to say to people yet because we haven’t even done anything yet. We haven’t even kissed, for Christ’s sake!” The tears threatened to come, but Natalia wasn’t going to let her sit with those words in her head, letting herself obsess and worry over them.

“Do you want to kiss me?” 

“What?”

Natalia stepped a little into her personal space, “Do you want to kiss me?” Natalia smiled a little at the still dazed look on Olivia’s face. “Well, I want to kiss you…a lot. I want to hold your hand. Sit next to you at dinner. Look into your eyes as we take a moonlit walk. There are so many things I want to do with you, Olivia, but I can’t when you keep running away or looking for something terrible to happen. I’m here and I’m not going anywhere.”

Olivia dropped her heavy bag and leaned back against the door.   She looked into Natalia’s eyes, seeing the truth of her love there. She had to let whatever was holding her back go before it destroyed the one good thing she ever had in this sorry world.

“I do want to kiss you. God, you have no idea how much!”

“You’d be surprised what I know,” Natalia smiled at Olivia’s lifted eyebrow.

“Do tell, Ms. Rivera.”

Natalia reached for Olivia’s hand, stroking the long fingers again with her own, like she had done earlier in the day, “Only if you take a walk with me.”

Olivia entertwined her fingers with Natalia’s and raised the hand to her lips, gently kissing it as her eyes fluttered shut. Finally, she looked back up and Natalia shivered at the look of barely restrained passion, “Okay. Let’s go.”

TBC… 


Date: 2009-05-06 05:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lostnfoundcause.livejournal.com
Ok seriously is it me or did you expected them, after that fight, to start making out like crazy, like stupidlyhotcrazymakout!! right there?

Date: 2009-05-06 11:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] akasarahsmom.livejournal.com
LOL... that would be the conclusion if they were a 'normal' couple... I think the Otalia wringer we've been going through lately will continue though... We might get a good hug out of it though :)

Anyway... yes... from any other couple in the middle of an arguement, racing to pack, I would expect reaching for the same item, hands brushing, quick breath intakes, intense looks into each other's eyes and KISS... then yeah... fall onto the bed...fade to black... (because it's a soap and because they are both women)...soaps don't actually fade to black as much as they used to... but I'm fairly sure with Olivia and Natalia they will... and I'm also fairly sure we can come up with some fan fic to um... illuminate the scene ;)

Date: 2009-05-13 02:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] karjens40.livejournal.com
Quite frankly at this point I'd settle for at least a high five LOL..

Date: 2009-05-06 06:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sinjenkai.livejournal.com
More please

Date: 2009-05-06 10:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laughsunshine.livejournal.com
Oh yes:)
Cute!

Date: 2009-05-06 11:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] akasarahsmom.livejournal.com
Very very nice. Let's hope something similar to that actually happens.

Date: 2009-05-06 04:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] half-life33.livejournal.com
ummm, yay. can this have happened? no jellybean?

Date: 2009-05-06 04:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wolfemeister.livejournal.com
Oh if only they do something on these lines. Thanks for the lovely imagery.

Date: 2009-05-06 05:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyvictory.livejournal.com
Awww, fantastic! The last lines are so sweet. ^_^!!

This better be the gist of what happens on the show...

Date: 2009-05-07 01:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tanama30.livejournal.com
nice start i can't wait for more update soon

Date: 2009-05-07 02:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] trocksmysocks.livejournal.com
i keep reading this over and over, i absolutely love it.


more.....?

Date: 2009-05-07 05:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ndasky1.livejournal.com
This was great. It's good to know that Nat is not going to let Liv keep running. I can't wait to see what happens next. :o)

Date: 2009-05-07 03:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] qarae77.livejournal.com
Love love love it! This is exactly how it SHOULD have gone down!!

Date: 2009-05-10 06:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] brighteyedcat.livejournal.com
le sigh. if only.

more?

Date: 2009-05-13 02:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] karjens40.livejournal.com
Okay, first...I always do a mental happy dance when I see one of your offerings. (too lazy to do a real one).

This was just brilliant. Loved it and really got a happy from the assertive Natalia. "you'd be surprised what I know." LMAO.

However, one tiny complaint... STILL no kiss. Damnit!!! haha. I've been away for a week so perhaps I shall find the next bit waiting to be read.

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