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Title:  Thin Line

Fandom:  Criminal Minds

Pairing:  Emily/JJ

Rating:  NC-17

Archiving:  P&P, WIK

Warning: Not beta’d.

A/N:  For [info]sofia_lindsay and her need for smut. J

A/N2:  I’m not saving this for IDF because 1) Sofia wanted smut (and what Sofia wants, Sofia gets) and 2) I wanted to prove to everyone I’m not dead, just getting ready for IDF.

 

 

“What the hell are you doing here?”  Emily blocked JJ’s entry to her home.

 

“Emily, please, let me in.  We need to talk.”

 

“There’s nothing to talk about, JJ.  You’re getting married to that…that detective AND you’re pregnant with his child.  I think that pretty much says it all, don’t you?” 

 

“No, no I don’t, and can we please not talk about this in the hallway where all your neighbors can hear?”  The blonde glanced around nervously.

 

Emily raised an eyebrow, “What’s the matter, Jennifer?  Ashamed or something?  ‘Fraid someone will hear about your personal life?”

 

“What the hell does that mean?”

Emily had had enough.  She grabbed JJ by her collar and yanked her into the apartment, slamming the door behind her.

 

“It means, you,” she poked the blonde in the shoulder, “kissed me and we…”  Emily drew up short at the images the thought provoked, “You acted like it meant something to you.  That entire weekend, and you said you were fine with us.  Fine with people knowing.  You acted like you didn’t have reservations.”

 

The brunette stepped away from JJ, running her long fingers through the dark hair, trying to stay calm as the next words came out.  She walked toward the floor-to-ceiling windows to look out over the Capitol, her back to JJ to hide the pain on her face.

 

“The next thing I know, this guy shows up staking a claim to you, saying you’re together, saying you’re…”

 

“And you pushed me to him, if I remember correctly,” JJ’s voice was hoarse and shaky.

 

Emily turned around, throwing her arms up in the air, the unshed tears evident, “What was I supposed to do, JJ?  Fight for you?  You hadn’t looked at me or even come near me in weeks.  How can I compete with him when he can give you all the things I can’t?  A home, security, acceptance, family.  Jesus, JJ!  You fucking lied to me!!!”  The tears came now without restraint.

 

JJ gently stepped closer, tears in her own eyes, “I know.  I’m sorry.”  The blonde reached for Emily only to have her hand forcefully slapped away.

 

“No!” The shock registered on JJ’s face.

 

“Emily, please.”

 

“No, Jennifer!”  Emily held up her hands, backing away.  She didn’t trust that she could stop herself, the anger inside practically a living entity.  “You can’t have it both ways.  You made your decision…now leave.”

 

“I did make my decision, Emily,” blue eyes pleaded with the brunette, “That’s why I’m here.”

 

It took a few seconds for the words to penetrate Emily’s heartbroken mind, “What?”

 

JJ stepped into Emily’s personal space, letting her fingers brush along a soft alabaster cheek.

 

“I did make a decision…you,” the blonde spoke in a husky whisper, her lips only inches away from Emily’s, teasing out the moment, before finally closing the distance as her fingers tangled in dark tresses.

 

Emily moaned, low and deep, savoring the flavor of JJ and letting the awareness of the words awaken her body.  A tightness of need coiled low in her belly and she felt herself grinding her hips into JJ seeking the necessary friction.  The adrenaline of their confrontation coursed freshly through Emily’s veins and she found her hands aching to grab, pull, and shove something and that’s exactly what she did.

 

She pulled the blonde hard against her body, her arms wrapping as tight as possible around the other woman, before she lifted JJ off the ground.  JJ’s response was instinctive.  Her long legs wrapped around Emily’s waist, trying desperately to find the contact she needed.  JJ found herself carried to the couch and dumped unceremoniously on her back.  A vision of a feral, dark-haired woman crawling over the couch arm to hover above her the only image she saw before hands reached down to rip at her white button up shirt and finally her white lace bra.

 

Emily wasted now time.  With a growl, she descended on JJ’s already hard nipples sucking hard.  The blonde squirmed, moaned, and bucked underneath her making the coil of need in Emily’s belly send out fresh rushes of adrenaline only to coil up tight again.  Emily knew she was losing herself because her vision was tunneling and all she could think about was making JJ scream her name.

 

Emily’s voice was rough and raw with need, “JJ, say it.  Say what I need to hear.”

 

JJ knew what she meant.  The brunette refused to take her without permission and now she needed to hear it more than ever to confirm to her that JJ wanted this as bad as she did.

 

“Jesus, Emily, fuck me!  Please, I need you.”

 

Emily bit down hard on JJ’s neck, making the blonde dig her nails into Emily’s shoulders and drag them down her back.

 

Emily quickly undid JJ’s jeans, not bothering to pull them down, before plunging three fingers deep into the writhing blonde agent, “Oh, fuck!!!  Jennifer, baby.” 

 

JJ grabbed the older woman by the hair, pulling her up to face her and look into her eyes, “I’m yours, Emily.”  Before the brunette could answer, JJ kissed her with abandon, her body and heart open to the dark profiler, as she let the orgasm rip through her with a groan.

Date: 2008-07-07 02:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sofia-lindsay.livejournal.com
*turns A/C up a little* Now that's how the last season should have ended!!!

How can I compete with him when he can give you all the things I can’t?
Has that woman not looked in the mirror lately!?! I mean, Crawfish v. Emily, even if I wasn't a lesbian, I'd go gay for Emily!!!!


On another note:
1) Sofia wanted smut (and what Sofia wants, Sofia gets)
You do realize what you've opened yourself up to now, don't you?

Date: 2008-07-07 03:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] calliopes-muse.livejournal.com
Ahhhh, you approve, I see. LOL

True...even someone dead would come back to life for Emily! But you have to remember that she had her heartbroken already by JJ so her self-esteem was kind of ripped to shreds. Poor thing, I'd happily comfort her. *eg*

You do realize what you've opened yourself up to now, don't you?

Why do I always do this to myself? *shakes head*

Date: 2008-07-07 03:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sofia-lindsay.livejournal.com
*stamps with seal of approval* Hell yes!

That's true! And we all know JJ apparently isn't thinking clearly! Chosing anyone over Emily? That's grounds for a trip to see the little men in the little white jackets! *ducks from incoming objects* ooh! Stand in line!

*eg*
Look at the bright side, this kicked my muse into gear to write something worse than PG..

Date: 2008-07-07 03:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] calliopes-muse.livejournal.com
Look at the bright side, this kicked my muse into gear to write something worse than PG..

YES!!! *pumps fist* I succeeded in my plan to get you back on the right path.

Date: 2008-07-07 03:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sofia-lindsay.livejournal.com
On the right path?? I'm assuming the only 'right path' in your mind is one that is filled with smut?

Date: 2008-07-07 04:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] calliopes-muse.livejournal.com
Absolutely! I just finished a Xena story for IDF and I had good intentions of light and funny. Instead, they started humping like rabbits and I couldn't stop them!!!

Date: 2008-07-07 05:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sofia-lindsay.livejournal.com
Hey! That sounds like my type of story! *g*

Date: 2008-07-07 05:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] calliopes-muse.livejournal.com
*nods* Yep! I think you'll like it.

Date: 2008-07-07 05:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sofia-lindsay.livejournal.com
*g*
You're such a bad influence!! Between you, Steppenwolf and darkbard, my poor mind is going to be corupted for good!!

Date: 2008-07-07 05:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] calliopes-muse.livejournal.com
LOL...we can't corrupt what is already corrupted. ;)

Date: 2008-07-07 07:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sofia-lindsay.livejournal.com
I beg to differ!! I wasn't corrupted until I started hanging with you guys!!!

Date: 2008-07-08 12:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] calliopes-muse.livejournal.com
Whatever! Like my momma used to say, "birds of a feather flock together." You came into this bad!! Don't even try to deny it!

Date: 2008-07-08 02:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sofia-lindsay.livejournal.com
I did no such thing!!! You guys converted me!!!

Date: 2008-07-08 01:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] calliopes-muse.livejournal.com
Oh yeah?? Then where's my toaster oven damn it!!!

Date: 2008-07-08 03:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sofia-lindsay.livejournal.com
Honey, you guys only converted me into a femslash addict. You don't get a toaster oven for that!!

Date: 2008-07-08 03:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sofia-lindsay.livejournal.com
Oh hush you! I have blackmail over you!! (or something like it!)

Date: 2008-07-08 03:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] steppenwolf-20.livejournal.com
Ups... shutting up now *g*

Date: 2008-07-08 05:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sofia-lindsay.livejournal.com
*pats head*
Good girl! *g*

Date: 2008-07-08 06:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sofia-lindsay.livejournal.com
*hmph* I am NOT your mother!!

Date: 2008-07-08 06:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] steppenwolf-20.livejournal.com
Yeah! That would be kinda impossible *rofl*

Date: 2008-07-08 07:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sofia-lindsay.livejournal.com
True.

But yeah... I wouldn't be telling my daughter the things I've told you! Or let her read my stories! *g*

Date: 2008-07-08 07:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] steppenwolf-20.livejournal.com
I think if your daughter read your stories she wouldn't see you with the same eyes again *loool*

Date: 2008-07-08 08:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sofia-lindsay.livejournal.com
I think she'd probably run in the other direction screaming!!!

Date: 2008-07-07 06:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lena-fan.livejournal.com
Wow that was hot, I loved it.
Mmmmmm feral Emily, I like that image xxx

Date: 2008-07-07 06:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] calliopes-muse.livejournal.com
Yeah, something about that image makes me go "mmmmm" too. Aughh, I have a couple of hours of work to go. I don't need to be thinking like that right now!

Date: 2008-07-07 06:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] geekgrrllurking.livejournal.com
Whew! Need to crank the air conditioning up around here again it would appear...

Nice work! And good to know you're not dead or anything. Now I'm anxiously awaiting your IDF fic with X and G humping like bunnies.

Date: 2008-07-07 07:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] calliopes-muse.livejournal.com
Wow, the power companies are going to love me!!! :)

Hopefully, it'll be well worth the wait. Now I need to get inspired to do some BW ones!!!

Date: 2008-07-08 02:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] geekgrrllurking.livejournal.com
Funny, you've inspired me to write a Xena fic. Here's hoping I can get it done for IDF! So many fandoms, so little time...

Date: 2008-07-08 01:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] calliopes-muse.livejournal.com
I KNOW!!!! I have so many things I've started that are almost finished. I sure hope you do finish the Xena one. I'd love to read that!

Date: 2008-07-07 08:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sophies-remedy.livejournal.com
Yay, you are still alive! This was good- a much better ending than the original one the CM writers came up with!

Date: 2008-07-08 12:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] calliopes-muse.livejournal.com
LOL!!! Why thank you! I think just about all fanfic writers in this fandom are better than the CM writers (at least when it comes to our lovely ladies).

Date: 2008-07-07 08:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] smartyshortie.livejournal.com
omg that was freaking amazing! Very well written! And I love the way JJ just gave herself completely to Emily

Date: 2008-07-08 12:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] calliopes-muse.livejournal.com
*nods* Me too!!! Who in their right mind wouldn't!!!???

Date: 2008-07-07 08:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] steppenwolf-20.livejournal.com
I think I'm in love with you!
Thanks for this life sign of yours (although I still might not be completely convinced that you're indeed alive; it might need some further assuring!! *g*)

“It means, you,” she poked the blonde in the shoulder, “kissed me and we…” *lol* I can totally see that!!!!

Thanks!!!!

Date: 2008-07-08 12:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] calliopes-muse.livejournal.com
Gee, do I feel poking? *ouch, not so hard!*

Oh don't worry, there's more, but it's coming for IDF.

I could see Emily doing that too. It's like this incredibly serious moment and argument and she does something that makes you snicker. That's a very Emily thing!

Date: 2008-07-08 08:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] steppenwolf-20.livejournal.com
Well... someone has too keep you gals from getting lazy *bg*
(And look as encouragement for you, I dusted off my old Gabs icon!!!)

Date: 2008-07-08 01:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] calliopes-muse.livejournal.com
*drools* I love that icon! She was so hawt in the last couple of seasons with that cute little haircut and sexy red warrior outfit.

I think I officially converted to a Gabsexual after the Gabspaz.

Date: 2008-07-08 02:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] steppenwolf-20.livejournal.com
Yeah, hot indeed!

Date: 2008-07-08 05:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] csiladies.livejournal.com
*Fans self* I think it got a little bit to hot in here. Great job as always, you gotta love smut :D

Date: 2008-07-08 01:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] calliopes-muse.livejournal.com
*bg* Thank you!!! I aim to please.

Date: 2008-07-08 08:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] widget007.livejournal.com
Wow!

*fans a blushing face*

That was hot! Just the right thing to warm me up on this cold winter's day, thanks!

And it warms my little heart that Emily, even on the edge of losing her control, still asks JJ for permission.

*applauds*

Well done!

Date: 2008-07-08 01:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] calliopes-muse.livejournal.com
Glad I could help out! :) Yeah, I can see Emily doing this. She has a lot of control and ability to compartmentalize, but only JJ can get under her skin enough to push those boundaries.

Date: 2008-07-09 05:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] widget007.livejournal.com
I'd have to agree with you on that! And boy does it make for good fic!

Date: 2008-07-08 06:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shady76.livejournal.com
wowza

I really needed that (in the middle of family vacation from hell)

Truly warmed my little Jemily smut deprived heart

:P

Date: 2008-07-09 07:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] darkbardzero.livejournal.com
Okay this is going to teach me a lesson - don't read smut before going to work for a night shift! Lol. Although, it did help me to keep going, such pretty nice hot images, just the way I like it!
Edited Date: 2008-07-09 07:56 am (UTC)

Date: 2009-03-25 04:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] malexfaith.livejournal.com
omg, Damn. lol. Im going to work now, and I tell you that if this is any indication today is going to be a awesome day. Cant wait to finish so I can come read more. Thanks heaps for sharing

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