ext_26215 ([identity profile] steppenwolf-20.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] calliopes_muse 2008-07-20 12:39 pm (UTC)

Nice one Calliope!!
I liked the build up, Emily hearing voices *lool*

I liked your version of the exploding car btw. as long as JJ kicks Crawfish out I could happily live with that!!

JJ being the aggressive one was a nice touch too, really hot!

But the ending!!! Soooo cute and sweet!!!
When she caressed the soft skin of JJ’s stomach, her heart couldn’t help but make a promise to the small life growing inside JJ.
Best sentence!!!!

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