I had a hard time with the smut too, but now that the confessions have been made we have all this nice sexual tension building so it's PERFECT!!! Actually, that's why I had to jump the s/l ahead a bit because, no matter how much I would LOVE to see these two jump each other in the elevator, I can't see that for their first time. Until they get past that, my writing will probably have to fast forward them to being a more established couple.
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Date: 2009-04-25 01:20 am (UTC)And the purple underwear...nice touch,huh? LOL