Hey! Thanks for the honest criticism. I really appreciate it. You have an excellent point and I think, looking back, you're right. I honestly can't tell you why I went that route, but once it was written it couldn't be undone. Perhaps if I come back to this x-over I can deal with this more. Sometimes people say things like this in the heat of the moment and realize later they shouldn't have let their emotions get the best of them. Besides, I put in this little phrase for Cindy that said "I think" so hopefully, it gives some leeway to deal with that later, if needed.
Again, thanks for the comments, and I'm glad that otherwise you liked the story.
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Date: 2009-01-30 04:44 pm (UTC)Again, thanks for the comments, and I'm glad that otherwise you liked the story.