Hahahaha, excellent! I got the babbling incoherent comment AND the fully cognizant comment.
I'm glad you liked that little exchange because I could so hear Emily saying that to JJ.
The POV thing was actually driving me crazy writing this because I kept having an urge to shift out of JJ's POV (*looks guilty* which I think I did once in a while). I don't know if I have a sequel in me on this one. For some reason, this was hell to write. We'll see though.
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Date: 2008-12-31 07:28 pm (UTC)I'm glad you liked that little exchange because I could so hear Emily saying that to JJ.
The POV thing was actually driving me crazy writing this because I kept having an urge to shift out of JJ's POV (*looks guilty* which I think I did once in a while). I don't know if I have a sequel in me on this one. For some reason, this was hell to write. We'll see though.