Holy... How could... what the... Good God! That's.... okay, deep breath! One more. Uhm... HOT!
Okay some real feed back now, that I have a little blood in my brain again *g* I liked the interaction between them. You showed that JJ had a thing for Emily before and how she connected with Jordan during the evening. I really liked them talking.
“Did you enjoy the show, JayJ?”
JJ stood and raced for the kitchen and her glass of wine, “I think I need a drink.”
“Oh my god, JJ! You did!”
That was sooo funny!
Uhm any chance for a sequel or maybe from Jordan's point of view??
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Date: 2008-12-31 01:42 pm (UTC)That's.... okay, deep breath! One more.
Uhm... HOT!
Okay some real feed back now, that I have a little blood in my brain again *g*
I liked the interaction between them. You showed that JJ had a thing for Emily before and how she connected with Jordan during the evening. I really liked them talking.
“Did you enjoy the show, JayJ?”
JJ stood and raced for the kitchen and her glass of wine, “I think I need a drink.”
“Oh my god, JJ! You did!”
That was sooo funny!
Uhm any chance for a sequel or maybe from Jordan's point of view??